Thursday, February 08, 2007

Basal distance

if it didn t have periods and commas it d be a poem about apostrophes and question marks about scenery do you have scenery a winter ride to the lebanese psychiatrist the reason to go to the psychiatrist is so men and women won t have to but tell them about it later so they can benefit from it i said my anxiety on tuesdays is revolting it used to be workshop day i used to like LIKE workshop day but ten years without workshop comma tuesdays eat me what is causing your reaction he asked war i said he said are you like the rest of us and you disagree with war yes i said i disagree with war and he said only one man agrees with war but he won t go to the war then he told me try meditation and i said it s not enough you must have a teacher for meditation on tuesdays an elevator is going up and down inside my body s frame not quote unquote mental an elevator is going up and down inside my body s frame not italics mental italics basal dash basal than mental double dash basal distress better than quote unquote mental illness in reject that label we experience it for them or driving in a winter glass to the doctor at eight early tend the gist you are seeking and save them red tape paperwork and general satisfaction of given treatment call it basal distance or basal distress not mental illness i heard the african american woman psychologist say her wards are mentally sick are white sick ones her black patients hurts typical i said raising my hand basal distance question mark might it be long before mental illness basal distance fills it next question mark

2 comments:

Bob said...

Hello Ann:

I'm not sure if you're the same as on the Wryting-L list, but I wanted to ask you something else...

I host a podcast for MiPoRadio called The Countdown and was hoping to use this poem in the next show. Would you mind if I used it and, if you don't mind, are you able to record it? The current show is in production right now...

Let me know if you have any questions.

Thanks for your time.
Bob Marcacci
bmarcacci AT gmail DOT com

didi said...

Hello - Your poem is up on THE COUNTDOWN.

http://miporadio.blogspot.com/2007/02/countdown-20.html

Thank you,
Didi Menendez